tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1523540527065158056.post6320277455598281723..comments2015-12-11T12:51:34.230+13:00Comments on Sonya @ Saint Pius X School: Expressive Writing : Would You Rather Be A Mountain or Tree??SPX Blog Admin 1http://www.blogger.com/profile/02631795048092220847noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1523540527065158056.post-52108951166088075732014-08-11T16:21:27.394+12:002014-08-11T16:21:27.394+12:00Hi Sonya,
What a great piece of expressive writin...Hi Sonya, <br />What a great piece of expressive writing! You made some very good points that made sense, I think i'd rather be a mountain as well. Do you know how mountains are formed? <br />Miss WaltersMiss Waltershttp://peswalters.blogspot.co.nz/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1523540527065158056.post-86340714906976498722014-08-11T16:16:39.446+12:002014-08-11T16:16:39.446+12:00Hi Sonya
I really LOVE this piece of writing and t...Hi Sonya<br />I really LOVE this piece of writing and the rationale behind why you would rather be a mountain! I think your reasons are excellent and really well thought out.<br />I think you still have some punctuation goals to focus on but your writing is amazing.<br />Well done!Russell Burthttp://www.ptengland.school.nznoreply@blogger.com