Wednesday, April 10, 2013

Goldilocks Persuasive Writing

I believe that Goldilocks did the wrong thing.

Firstly, she broke into the bear's house. It is against the law to break into someone's house. She doesn't own the house and she does not have the right to do that. would you like it if someone broke into your house?

Secondly, she used things without asking and broke things. It is rude to go into property that you don’t own, how would you like it someone came into your house touched your property that you brought and broke  it? The poor worried innocent bears.  

Thirdly, she left when they came home. First of all that was not polite to leave the home  without asking for forgiveness.  Second of all she can’t afford anything that she broke because she is just a little girl.

My opinion is that she should go to  jail because breaking into someone's house is against  the law.  

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