Expressive Writing: My Family

Sentences:

Blue - Simple   Pink -  Compound  

Purple - Complex

Underline Words - Interesting Vocabulary

Green - Punctuation

In total I have 4 sisters. My house is full of madness. Especially having my Aunty (from Samoa) with us. I love my sisters:)

Sana (my older sister) is 21. She attend's to AUT University. She is recently in Samoa , working on a conference. My younger sister , Alecia also attends Saint Pius X. I would describe Alecia as a bright and intelligent girl. She's very helpful. I really enjoy her company. My younger sister Angeline is very  naughty. In November she'll be attending Saint Pius X school. I love Angeline, even if she is a pain. My youngest sister Annabelle is just adorable:)

Milk's Journey: 48 Hours in 48 Seconds

         

Just from watching this video I can see that Milk goes through a long process.Milk is certainly worth the Money:) Farmers have to wake up early to feed them. Then the milk process starts. The farmers prepare the sucking thing's on the cows udders. Then the Milk gets pasteurized and clean. Without cleaning the milk, we wouldn't be able to drink the milk. The the milk is taken to a factorie to store in bottles. Then the  Bottles (of milk) are sent to Supermarkets. Where we buy our milk:)

Powtoon: Ambury Farm Trip

Expressive Writing: Anonymous

Simple: Blue  Compound: Red    Complex: Pink

I’m not perfect. I don’t have that perfect world with perfect people. Let’s face it. This world is cruel, Very cruel. I hate alot of people which is natural I hate this particular person. She/He is sooo annoying and mean. Sometimes she/he reminds me of those cruel people on Oliver Twist. She/he is not so good at what they do. Most of the time she/e scare’s the people they work with. Let’s just say this person’s name is James. James is a carpenter. He makes children cry and always talk’s about his stupid miserable life ( like we care).  James always has something to say.

In other words, I’ve never hate James so much!!

In other words, I’ve never hated somebody so much!!

Move Note : Collaboration with Sione Toa:)

Here is a Move Note based on the sacrament Anointing of the Sick. From this sacrament, I learnt that  it is important to heal the sick. Please click on the link below to watch the Move Note:)

LINK -

https://www.movenote.com/v/dUi6Lixpf3GB9

Ohh and check out Sione Toa's Blog:) -

http://spxsione-toam.blogspot.co.nz/

Rachel's Movenote

Move Note: Multiplication Question