Friday, August 1, 2014

Expressive Writing : Would You Rather Be A Mountain or Tree??

* To use punctuation constantly
* To make sense of what I write
* To use Specific and interesting vocabulary

Underlined Words = Vocabulary
Personally I'd rather be a Mountain. Because I want to feel the earth breathing. Being a Mountain, you wouldn't have to worry about life or death. Because Mountain's don't die. Nature never dies. Except for trees, When it gets cut down it literately dies.Being a Mountain who wouldn't have to worry about what you look like or smell. You don't have to worry about being judged either. Being a tree there would be a lot to worry about. The roots of the tree is what holds it together. It's kind of like a house. A good foundation, is what a house's  need. Those are the reason's why I want to be a Mountain.


Russell Burt said...

Hi Sonya
I really LOVE this piece of writing and the rationale behind why you would rather be a mountain! I think your reasons are excellent and really well thought out.
I think you still have some punctuation goals to focus on but your writing is amazing.
Well done!

Miss Walters said...

Hi Sonya,
What a great piece of expressive writing! You made some very good points that made sense, I think i'd rather be a mountain as well. Do you know how mountains are formed?
Miss Walters

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